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a long awaited return.It was raining when we landed.
A shock
to our sun-drenched systems,
stumbling with snatched-
away sleep.

Another bus, another train
whirring upon endless tracks.
We run, we flee through foreign streets –
disdainful eyes stare on,
watching fugitive

outsiders -
desperate for a taste
of home.

Alive Like Dirt-

Winter vanished, a dream
Minutes after having woken;
The imprint and the lines
Still crisscrossing the edges
Of thought, retreating at my
Touch. It was important.
           I think.
                      I thought.
Though, I've lost it now.
           Am reeling now.

I reached out, five distinct
Points forming a living symbol.
           A tool.
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Reflectionby ~MD-STAR

Literature / Poetry / General Poetry / Visual & Found Poetry

©2011-2013 ~MD-STAR

Old stuff...

Somewhere between
the typical mirror
reflection
is little more than a disorganized mass
impossible to sustain soon
to disintegrate
its
death is a
long war. This Rivalry
of
faces and
echoes
is a pale reflection
of every phenomenal form

Daily Deviation

Given 2012-05-05

Reflection by ~MD-STAR ( Suggested by `Kneeling-Glory and Featured by `thorns )

~~mad 0 0~~

~~sad 0 0~~

~~fear 0 0~~

~~neutral 0 0~~

~black-paladin-design May 12, 2012 Student Digital Artist

Brilliant!

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~MD-STAR May 12, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

Thank you!

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Mood: Thanks

~banmoi22 May 7, 2012 Student Artist

thank you

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~bitteryetsweet May 7, 2012

Nice!

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~MD-STAR May 7, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

Thank you!

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Mood: Love

*Aryiatia May 6, 2012

Very nice found poem

I love the style you did to portray these powerful words - amazing work!!!

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~MD-STAR May 6, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

Thank you!

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~NamikazeH4 May 6, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

_{Neat idea and awesome poem!}

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~MD-STAR May 6, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

Thank you!

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~NamikazeH4 May 7, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

_{You're welcome!}

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